Stop spewing out poetry will ya?

Anyways... the messege was great and all but uh... why are you in Texas again? ;)

Aken Sol

Awww! That was cute lol.

The only thing that I found weird in it, Was the last stanza seemed really different compared to the other two..But I liked the last stanza the most. =) 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Well, i loved it...Thanks for your advice, i will most deffinitely look into it!! Keep it up 5/5

Mmhmmm.
beautfiul poem.
very strong point and use of words.
the last two lines are fantastic.
keep up the great work.
yours truly,
meg.

Wow. i can see that your passion for poetry is true. i think your an outstanding wirter and although your poems are deep they show great character.