Haha, gotta love surprise endings. I like this, it's got a good flow to it as well which a lot of the poems in this category seem to lack.

He he that was so cute sis! I loved i! great beginning! :D *hugs*

OK that was funny football season I was imaginging something totally different this is awsome 5/5 maybe u can read one of mine

You have good potental in your writing!