A good write and full of meaning
But You did'nt need to repeat one verse after each new verse unless of course you wrote it as song lyrics then In my humble opinion it is excellent material for a song

I am amazed that was 1 of the best things ive read in awhile

If i had the type of personality that became inspired, i would definitely be. this poem digs deep to ur soul. 5/5

I apsolutly LOVE this poem!!! i love it keep up the wonderful work!

OMFG
my favourite today!!!
ahh
thank you just wat i needed to read.
*sighs*
5/5 definately.
Thank you for entering and coming 4th in my contest I enjoyed each poem with each twist and turn.
~Emma