I love the repetitiveness it goes perfect with this poem

love it!! 5/5

Hiya Beth, i love this poem. its so good..I like the words..
I'm so sad today..:-(
Riana

Hey thnx 4 tha comment, thort i would return tha favour, your peoms are great, i like them alot, this peom espesially, neways im out catchya
take care
luv kat

Really really good
love it keep writting
aunabeth

I love it thank u for writing it its how i feel as u can tell by my poem u commented on

kera

Iâ??m sorry that I hurt you girl,
I kept the truth from you.
Iâ??m sorry that I hurt you girl,
There was nothing else I could do.

Bethy,

I loved the first stanza and the poem kept its meaning throughout the entire poem. The meaning and emotion hidden within each line is noticeable. Awesome...

5/5