Hey darl a very touching piece. i love the way uve structured this poem. great use of words. good job. keep it up xx
love from
dora

"Somewhere, across thousands of miles
My heart looks to the stars and smiles
Somewhere, in a far distant corner of my mind,
Are those many regrets I did find
Can you still love me? Do you still see?
You are my one and only one I love."

You know what, I soooo loved that stanza, it was remarkable. Your entire poem was excellent. You have a different style of writing and I just love that. Keep them coming my friend.

Best Wishes
Michelle

Awww this is very great
I love the reptition in every stanza, very greatly written
I can truly understand these feelings of questioning and wonders!
great choice of words!

I've to say that I adore your poetry..you always write them in a good way and you can make the reader truly inspired also =)

Keep the excellent work up
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x0x

Each time you become greater and greater. welcome to my favorite list.

This piece is touchingly beautiful, filled with emotions. The first stanza is my favorite, but the rest of the poem is great, too. Another one flawless.
5/5