Aww.. hehe! that sounds so fun! how come i wasn't there? :P great write, the descriptions were very vivid and it flowed well.. the only problem i could find was here :

Water-balloons were flying right past my face,
Like missiles, flying right past my face.
^ i dont think you should say "flying right past my face" it ruins the effect..

great write though! 5/5

Hey ria! gr8 poem! how long hav u been writin poems from! the poem is relli descriptive! nice! wud like 2 read more! keep up the gr8 work!

Hey ria i really like thsi one it talks about summer and how much fun it really is lol good times great poem keep it up :)
take care
xoxo
robyn