Wow! great poem, i really liked that! it was so metaphorical and just really made me think..

Full of beaning,
^ here, i dont think "beaning" is a word.. maybe you meant "meaning" or "beaming" not sure.. just checking

excellent poem, really kept my eyes glued to the page! 5/5

Hey this is a great poem i think i'll take your advice and start divinding my thoughts

You know I honestly loved your poem because you showed true feelings very well
beautifully written hun =)
i love the ending lines and the begining was captivating and inspiring.
great piece of work ;)

thanks for commenting on my poem, meant alot to me =)

Take care of yourself
Best Of Luck
NemO xxxxxxxxx

HEy thanks on the comment and this poem really helped me out in a situation i'm in