Wow..tht was really good! i liked it! and its true bout how u said it helps you see whats wrong sometimes u cant find the words..u only hav ethe emotions so when u put it onto paper u can see what it is ur really feeling =] great job!! Kepp writitng!

Tyler, once again I like your poem. Keep it up.

I am impressed tyler. You write VERY well for a 12yr old!! Lovely Stuff:)

Godbless
Sammib