TJ-
This poem is sad and you make the point clear. I can really relate to the topic. I like the beggining of the poem!
Alwayz-ashley b

THAT IS REALLY GOD I LOVE THIS POEM

Hi TJ Bake

Of course I remember you. Thanks for the comment and I hope you read more because we have a similar style and by the sounds of things we have been hurt.

Good poem , I could relate to this one easy! take care man keep writing and yours and I will read them.
I will to and I hope you read them and your feedback is welcome

OC

Very nice poem. Straight to the point message.
I like that in a poem, you said so much with so little. The rhyming was great too.
-Peace

This is an awesome poem. I really enjoyed reading it.Whta you said is something a lot of people can relate to, and thats good in poetry. Props