"Do you remember the time you and her laught of me and said I were strange?
I thought you would hug me and laught after five minutes."
**I would check your grammar and spelling; laught is not a word.**
''But you wasn't.''
**check your grammar again, I think you mean weren`t.
Nice poem, keep up the good work. It was kind of bumpy with the long lines and grammar errors, but I could definately understand where you`re coming from. 4/5.