Comments : But I did

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha Hollywood

    "Do you remember the time you and her laught of me and said I were strange?
    I thought you would hug me and laught after five minutes."

    **I would check your grammar and spelling; laught is not a word.**

    ''But you wasn't.''
    **check your grammar again, I think you mean weren`t.

    Nice poem, keep up the good work. It was kind of bumpy with the long lines and grammar errors, but I could definately understand where you`re coming from. 4/5.