Good message, but I think you need to work on your rhythm, particularly considering how much longer some of the lines are than others. If you need to, don't constrict yourself to quatrains, move on to bigger stanzas, but I'd figure out a rhythm scheme that works for you.

Ture that! lol This was a really good poem.

"But yet you look over it without a doubt"
[Yet you look at it without a doubt]
I thought that sounded better.
(When you use but and yet together, it causes a contradiction.

I really loved the first stanza, just fix it up, and it will be amazing.
The rest of the poem was rather good. Keep on writing!
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Now this one, i liked! the message was really good and strong.. my favourite was the last stanza.. those phrases are amazing.. nice job! 5/5