Oh Wow. This is very beatuiful *tear tear*. Lol. There is nothing that could be changed. It's Great! 5/5

XxXNothing-Gold-Can-StayXxX

Wow great flow and great ryhme pattern! i hope the girl u wrote this for appreciates it (if it was written for someone). Keep it up!!

Wow, this was a great write. the flow was good. Keep up the good work.

Ciao, Joe

Aww so sweet I love it 5/5

Hey!
this is the hush___ sound
i said i would read and compliment and wow this is a great poem!!! good job cyber high five.... lol

the hush... sound
~`sarah`~

Omg that is suck a wecked poem I LOVE it i reali like it man its just so good (y)

Amber