Comments : Losing Myself

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    Every night in my dreams
    I search for you
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    I loved those lines!
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    But the more I search
    The more my soul disappears
    The more I desire you
    The more my heart breaks
    And the more I love you
    The more I
    Lose myself..
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    And I loved that stanza. =D

    This poem was so good. And I could have related to it awhile back aswell. You did great on it. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Love Panda

    GREAT WRITTING-I CAN RELATE....

    BRAVO

    OCTOBERLIFEGUARD

    XXX

  • 17 years ago

    by Dionne Jones

    I know where your coming from with this poem, its great x

  • 17 years ago

    by Megann Lee

    Awh, thats how I feel right now. Even though I do love him. But yeah. Anyway. I loved this poem.