What a beautiful tale of love. So sad that the opinion of others makes you feel marked. Let your souls shine and your love flow. Very bold poem. You are to be commended.

Kim... I've fallen in love with this poem! Your words are fantastic. Perfectly written, wonderfully crafted! I bow before you, for this piece has left an inspiration upon my heart. Love is such a powerful emotion, you've describe that so sweetly here!!!

Lovely write Kim. The way others perceive us or our relationships should notmatter but you have captured the human nature of judgement in this beautiful write!

Ahh, Kim. Very pretty. I will always fall prey to your usage of such beautiful language.
"Several white petals have fallen
On your chestnut hair, and
Like fingers on a willow harp
My hands play with your tresses?
SO PRETTY!
BTW how come you didn't tell me that you're a lesbian!?!?!? I'm like...one of your best friends!

lol

P.S. The question mark (a.k.a. ?) After the last line of the highlighted stanza in my comment was actually supposed to be a quotation mark (")
LOL, go get 'em you lesbian, you!
Kidding again...I know the difference. Ahahah...

Great imagery in your poem Kim. I loved it!
Nate aka "The Tie Guy"