Pressure is a reality of life, this poem really does describe how alot of people feel. Pressure. Pain. Never seeing a way out. Nicely written. Just a suggestion... dont use the word And to much. It throws the flow off a little. But really awesome write!!

Godbless
Sammib

Amazing poem. it has good flow.. word choice.. and rhythm.. its amazing. i love it.. i can really relate.. thats how i feel.. alot of other ppl feel the same way. its sad how that is.. wel ur very talented adn this is a great poem.. i love it.. great job.
take care
angie

This poem is really written well...
i can relate alot its pretty much excatly how i feel...i really liked it
keep up the good work
take care
much love rochelle...x

I like this one a lot.. It flows really well and i like the rhythm to it.. I think it's great though.. I can relate a lot to it.. Sounds like every day for me...Good poem!