Definitely relate to this. Beautifully written. Sad, Effective... great idea.. nice style. Loved the style. Has the readers full attention.

Godbless
Sammib

Great poem-you have a nice title for it 5/5 keep writing!

This poem was very good...i like it 5/5!

Omg wow i lveo it.. i can relate to it.. its amazing.. i love how u wrote it.. it has good flow word choice and rhythm.. its relaly really good. keep writing ur so talented.. great job
take care and stay strong
angie

Hey awesome poem really well written! 5/5 keep up the amazing work!