I got really confused, maybe it's just me..but i don't know..some parts i understood, some i didnt...but over all it was good!!!

Touching and quite an emotional poem, well done 5 stars

But the sadness and pain
That develops over time
When you heartlessly reject me
And throw me to one side..
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I loved that stanza. This was another beautiful write Jessy. So much emotion in it. You have a great way with words. You know how to word your poems really well to keep the reader interested. Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

"Words cannot describe
The feelings that are pulsating
Through my veins.."

Loved this stanza-expresses a lot (even though it's saying how it can't be descibed...) great poem! 5/5

Awww... this really touches me. it really made me think. Love evokes so many emotions... I like this piece. if you want, read some of mine? pick any one that you want. thanks!