Aw Sean, i miss you too! :)

Aken Sol

As deep as the ocean's vibrant hue
and as cold as the sea is too;
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I liked those two lines, Mainly cause I just like the ocean. =)

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crisp as an autumn morning,
like how your eyes shine true.

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That part sounds really..pretty?

And, I liked how you ended it aswell. Awesome Nonet! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow.. how do you write such excellent poetry? you truly are an amazing writer.. maybe i will try writing one of these.. :P although, it looks really hard! great job! 5/5

Interesting poem, nice way to write a nonet.

Good presentation.
I like the way you reveal the meaning of the poem right at the end. It is closed off very effectively and is overall a well written piece.
Sophie x

That was vey sweet, once again, excellent!

OMG! I love your writings...I don't know what exactly I love about them. I guess I like how they get straight to the point. love it hope to see more very soon!!!