W0w thats increadible!!! thats what my friends are telling me! keep writing ur awse0m!
l0ve always
aLi

Wow thats amazing. il ove it . its so good it has great flow rhythm adn word choice. ur very good at writing.. ppl have told me that too that i shouldnt be sad.. well keep writing and keep ur head up
take care
angie

This is far the best i think i have ever heard. and keep up the good work i looked forward to seeing more good things come from you.xxooxx

A very talently written poem, great job
it touched me

Awww.. that was great! the descriptions and emotion worked really well.. the only problem i have was with the flow, it didn't quite work.. keep it up though! 4/5

Wow amazing.... very interesting yah! job well done keep on writing!5/5

This is a nice poem!
keep it up!