Comments : Rejection

  • 17 years ago

    by uponfairywings

    This is a wonderful poem, I love it. I can tell you poured your emotions into. Fabulous!

    xoxoxo Haley

  • 17 years ago

    by Bill Turner

    Such a sad, mournful piece. I can feel the pain in your words....the hurt and sorrow shines through. Wonderfully written.

  • 17 years ago

    by Chelsey

    The times when I felt the lowest
    I really needed a friend,
    but you were consumed in your own life.
    You didn't know I wanted mine to end.

    ^^ I feel you Cudds....I just lost a best friend over this..she don't even realize it but I've needed her lately and I havent heard from her and feel EXACTLY like that stanza

    I spent years thinking it was my fault,
    but now I can finally see
    that I never rejected you.
    You rejected me.

    ^^ BAM! you totally described my feelings right there...I always feel like its my fault as well but its hers..I feel rejected too! I really feel the pain in this poem Cudds I just loved it! Keep writing...I feel like I'm reading my own worse
    Chels

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    Sad and heartbreaking yet uplifting at the same time. I could almost feel the pian until the end when I felt like strength was gained from the realizatioin there was nothing wrong with the girl but rather it was the man.