Very nice poem. The stanza abd the word flow were excellent. I loved your repetition. Beautiful work. keep writing. And thanks for your comment :)

Woah i can really relate to this..
i really like how youhave written this poem..
your really good

Gud poem
It had a strong message
u have lots of talent and ill look out 4 more of your work
thanks 4 ur comment
take care
~AllCutUp~

A good job and thx for ure comment. it was a pleasure having a look at ur work