Omg wow. this is a very sad poem.. it broke my heart when i read it.. i love it tho.. its so good. it makes alot of sense i understand it.. ur very talented.. i like how it flows adn the rhythm and word choice was amazing. keep writing.. i wana read more of ur poems.. great job.. stay strong
take care
angie

This poem was very sad. It may not make total sense to me, but it does to you and thats what matters I can tell it was emotional and that makes it great, it was a very good poem. And thanks for your comment on mine :).