Comments : My Dream

  • 17 years ago

    by Laura

    A beautiful poem filled with hope and despair. Turning fantasy into reality is the biggst adventure of all.

  • 17 years ago

    by C Cattaway

    I wish the man I love could say something like this to me.. it leaves me wanting more.. very well written.. 5/5.. well done. xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Simon Hayes

    Another splendid write. Emotions are clearly described. A warming piece.

  • 17 years ago

    by χ-я.ι.α-χ

    Nice poem! I loved all the discription and details. Its a really lovely poem. I especially loved your finishing in the last stanza, it was a really cute poem! Have you checked any of my latest? xoxox

  • 17 years ago

    by SammiBABY

    That's so beautiful* I hope all your dreams come true.

    sammi xxx