That was amazing..i loved it!

U should be on a high this was the perfect poem, rhymend well and flowed great, a beautiful touching poem well done 5/5

Id' walk the steps leading to the truth,
[I think you were meant to put "I'd"]
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It was a pretty short poem. But it was good to read. The flow seemed alright. And I don't think the rhyming was forced. Overall, A pretty good poem! 5/5

`Taleee.

CONSIDER YOURSELF BLESSED WITH THE GIFT OF WORDS. THE FLOW WAS GOOD. THE SUBJECT EXCELLENT. REALLY A GOOD WRITE.

Great job and use of words... good work 5/5

Great job it flowed well and i luved it 5/5 good job

Oh... this one is also nicely written! I like the way you put in words the feeling of someone who has a desire to write... I love it!

The ending was a bit of a let down, the last line, but the rest was brilliantly written.

xDarkSuicidex 5.5

I like this alot, especially the first line. Nicely done!