Aww! I liked this so much. It reminded me of dancing tehe. Another well done poem from you!! I loved the way you worded it. And, I also liked the ending, going back to reality. Awesome write Jessy! =D 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow amazing poem right here. i defiantly like this a lot. its really good. keep writing 5/5

This poem was cute!! I agree with `Taleee that i love the way you worded it!! and i have to agree with ¤Brianna¤ that i LOVED the ending!! another wonderful poem!! 5/5!! Well Done!!

Excellent writting skills....ax

Its really good how you talked about how everything was good and she had fans and stuff and then you said, 'i will leave this world and go back to reality' er something like that... thats awsome. just one question though, by your love poems i thought you were a guy, but this poem makes me think you are a girl...which is it?

Wow, that was such an awesome poem!! I LOVE THE ENDING ^_^
As I have said before, you really talented :P
Keep it up!!
Jen

That was am amazing poem I enjoyed it just as much as every other poem of yours I have read.