Wow, great. 5/5

Oh Wow. Most Lovely poem.

I really liked:

a feeling of sensation,
lay upon my heart,
for the hand of god,
lay on my shoulder,
As a charm of good luck.

Very nice! 5/5
You should try and make it a bit longer though. =]

xx.N-G-C-S.xx

Omg! ***TEAR*** u know i couldn't write a non rhyming poem lyk that if it killed me! you are truely talented if you ever publish a book i will be the 1 one to buy it!!!!!! much love!
tara~~screename~~tenten

Nice short but complex sweet hehe