Comments : Just One Chance

  • 17 years ago

    by Bri

    I think this poem is fair!!! its good, and i think alot of people ask themselves these ?s
    ~bri

  • 17 years ago

    by Tristan

    I really really like this poems...
    it was very well written..but i would work on making stanzas and maybe a better rythmic pattern..other than that...great job!
    tristan