Very Nicely Written Indeed...

Great poem. Youve been on my favourites for quite some time now and I was waiting for your 30th poem to come up. Its great and congrats on your new award :p.

5/5
~*`Bryce Dressler`*~

Even though it is so sad i find it to be absolutely beautiful. it seemed that you put your heart and soul into it. keep up the good work.

This was a good poem. Very deep.

-Taylor

I love this poem. I think it expresses pure love, there's no hate in this poem. Just love, and that's pretty cool, and amazing. The last stanza is really sad, and I think sometimes love is like that, there's good and bad, and sometimes you just have to hold on to the good things, and let go of the bad.

If this is your story, I hope you're OK. Let me know if you need anything.

XoXo
Gaby