Every line makes sense and goes well with each other. Great job

Gentle winter wind:
frosty kisses slowly soothe
overheated minds.

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That first stanza sounded like being happy?

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Bitter winter wind;
she freezes my joints until
I can write no more.

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That one sounded like a fight? If that makes sense?

anyways. I thought it was a great haiku. *nods* it was! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Wow.. that was nicee.. i actually prefered the first one more though.. it was so beautiful and your descriptions were amazing.. it was well though out too.. the way the wind cools off his hot mind.. very well written poem! 5/5

Thought*

I just love your Haikus. =)

joy*:.xx

I love winter!

* What did you understand?
Winter can relate to different feelings.
* How did it make you feel?
Cold...brrr...I liked the words that you chose, so I enjoyed reading it.
* Which part did you like? Why?
The first part, because that's the way I feel about winter.

XoXo
Gaby

To me, this poem sort of relates to the saying by Shakespeare, "Look the innocent flower, yet be the serpent under it" (proubly worded it wrong, but something to that effect). Meaning that, winter can be such a beautiful time of year, yet one of the most deadly. What may look one thing, may turn out to be another and/or the complete opposite. Thats what I saw anyways. I don't know if that's the effect you were going for, but I hope I'm right in one way or another!
I also like the contrast between the two stanzas, like Taleee pointed out. Man I love haikus.. you're so good at them =)
Good Job.

.oOo. I liked that. Very well written. Great imagary. Beautiful.

Nice imagery. Good Haiku.
2 for 1 deal ;)

Wow, this is great. I've read it about 20 times now and it just gets better and better...lol.
I love the second stanza but I feel like either one without the other would be missing something...if that makes sense?
Take care and keep it up~Holly

You write haiku's very well, I really enjoy reading them. Good job Mr. Sean Allen, very good. 5/5

Ravyn

Hey thanx for sticking up for me in that contest i started, but didnt finish