Very nice job, just some little things, tear and care and was and flaws don't exactly rhyme.

Very nice and sweet. If you'd ever be interested in doing a collaboration with me, I'd like to... I just need to make sure I can deliver!

I thought the rhythm was well balanced in this piece... I don't know if you made a conscious effort with that, but if you did it definitely paid off.

The only part I thought strange was this line: "And I put our love to rest" I thought maybe instead it could say "And put our love to the test" Or something. I dunno :/ Tehe. But otherthan that, I thought it was a great poem. Abit shorter then what you usually do, but it was still filled with alot of emotion. Awesome job Jessy =P 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

I like the resilience you portray in this. It's quite refreshing.
Nice rhyming and great flow....well done.
Take care and keep it up~Holly

Your poem was excellent.
it was very sad as well.
amlost depressing, in a good way.
i like your style of poetry.
or, at least i liked THIS poem :D
good job

Aww so gentle and so sweet i love this poem passion is in it aswell as sadness you've comvined them both together and i love it im sorry that you miss your loved one but i cant stop thinking about this poem i love it well done you have created a beaty xoxroxyxox

Very well done you seem very nice and honest if ya ever need or wanna talk my name is kody -monkeymadness362@yahoo.com i'd be glad to be here for you ^^ peace

That's sweet and sad at the same time. a brilliant mix of the two. rock on

Sad and beautiful poem, my friend! The rhyming worked brilliantly and the last stanza was so cute! I loved it! Well done, keep writing those amazing poems!

BtW, Thanks for commenting on my work too. It means a lot! And for helping to find the mistakes I make. Im Spanish, so my English is not perfect... (Or at least by now, lol) Once again, thanks!

Best wishes,
TILLmyLASTtearFALLS