I reallly love this poem.. i can really relate... i kno how u feel... great job writing this.. it has a lot of deep dark emotion.. its relaly good. ur very talented.. keep writing. i love ur poems they r all so good
take care and stay strong
angie

I LOVE IT! best one i have read today. i can feel the poem. im addicted too.

I like it, the best I've read so far today. It has a nice flow, maybe try to clean up the look of it a bit. Capitals and punctuation.. It can go a long way. Thanks for the comment btw.
5/5

You're very talented as well, you don't sugarcoat things. Many people can relate when they have no where else to turn. Having been a passed '' cutter '' I totally understand where you're coming from. Wonderful. :)

Hey, thanks for commenting on my poem "in the darkness" I like this poem, you are very good at making your verses flow. Comment some of my other poems please. Thanks again
Lotus

GOSH GURL U R VERRY GOOD,I LUV THEM POEMS,I WAS LIKE THAT B 4 I ALMOST DIED TOO.BUT SUMTHIN WAS TELLIN ME I HAD TO LIVE MY LIFE TO THE FULLEST OR JUST LET MY LIFE B AS DAYS PASS,I LUV THOESE POEM THO.

That poem is sensational, great use of words. It makes you feel like you can see the person, great work.

This is great but u sould make it a little longer

This one is amazing and i loave it two will you please check out my poem and read my sucide ones and tell me how they are they are not as good as yours but i am trying to get better and you inspire me do just that.

Wow thats an amazing poem =)
although i cant relate the subject i still felt the meaning behind it... it was so well written =)

*~*Jen*~*

Great poem! IT reminded me of something but thats okay because I really loved this poem!

Great work

Short simple and to the point...yet full of emotion and drippin w/ feelin!!!!!! well done!! :-D

This was amazing.. i can relate to it and i kno the feeling.. its like once u start u cant stop... i was addicted aswell... excellent work with this one =)

Good job!!! i love it....and i kno and can relate to wat ur talking about....the knife can become both your worst enemy and best friend! keep up the good work....great rhyme scheme

Hey Wow That Poem Was Really Good Hope It's Not True Though...But I No How Hard It Can Be To Stop Cutting...5/5