W0W!! excellent poem. Its really deep and I love that. The rhyming is great too.

Please comment on my poems when you get the chance

Amazing poem. i love it.. it has great rhythm.. flow and word choice.. its so amazing.. i can realte too.. ur very taletned.. keep writing and i will keep reading..great job
take care
angie

Very sad..but i loved it...and it was deep...u are really good at writing...5/5 fer sure...

~Bl0oDyAnGeLeYeZ~

Brilliantly written