Excellent poem....lots of gold stars for you!

thanx for nice comments on mine

Great poem----absolutely love the last line-really sums up the poem----Im sorry that this a a true story though.....hope things get better for you----5/5

Wow!! that was amazing you used such desciption im glad your proud of this poem lol.
Its really ncie and you rythmed well made it simple but its great.
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