Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww jello, i love it!! 5/5!! keep it up buddy boy!!

Really really sweet i love it
God bless u
Good luck!!!

My life has changed
Ever since I meet you
[I think you were meant to say "ever since I met you"]
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I am whole with you by my side
I enjoy this view

With you as my wife
I enjoy this view
[You said the same line twice and to me it threw it off a little, mainly cause they're so close together.]
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And all the times we had
That we agreed
[Agreed on what? Marriage? I was a little confused with that.]

..It was a pretty good poem, Thought it was sweet. =)

`Taleee. xx.