Nice poem another great job =) keep it up hehe.

Congrats, u have potential. keep writing, good poem. =)
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Aww. That was very good. I liked the emotion. Nice work

-Jennifer. Overall Rating: 4/5

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Awwe that was so sad and good! i can really relate to that poem...if its true i hope it works out =P 5/5 xxx

Been threw that b4. i know where youre coming from... again great job writing.