Ur poem is beautiful. it has a rhyme to it. it is wel written and sounds like its from the heart. i sense that u held bak a little, but it was beautiful none the less. i am new to giving constructive criticism sorry if i say something bad

This is great poem I like it!

Wow its awsome

Straight from the heart... and so true...

I liked it
passionate

Really good.keep up the good work

Hey this poem is great keep it up

Wow..amamzing use commas though so its not a huge run on, and yea great jobb.

lissa