Comments : You....pure and simple

  • 17 years ago

    by Tammie

    This is a really good short poem. I'm used to your poems being long, and this shows you can also create a really great short poem too. Really great show of emotion. Thanks for the comments they mean alot to me.. Keep up the great work.
    Much love,
    Tammie xoxo

  • 17 years ago

    by Mrs. DiazBaez

    Great job, its a simple short poem but it conveys a lot of feelings and emotion.
    Steph :)

  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Good poem! Its like sad/sweet, good combination.

    Thanks for the comment

  • 17 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    This is like a bitter/sweet situation. Great poem. 5/5
    -Vino

  • 17 years ago

    by Tripp

    Short, but literally gushing emotion...great job, keep it up. just keep looking for someone new, don't slave after one guy. I understand how it can be hard, but you've gotta keep trying...