Comments : Doubts of enchantment

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost & Delirious

    First of all, I love the title of your poem, it's just beautiful. I also like how it's written, it kept my attention and your message is clear. This was my favorite part, because I can relate to it:

    We never even kissed,
    you barely even hugged me.
    Is there any other man,
    who can love you like i can?
    Is there any one to love you,
    anywhere near as I do?

    The ending is also amazing, "I can't deny this doubt".

    Good job! 5/5

    XoXo
    Gaby

  • 17 years ago

    by Whisper

    David I loved it!! It's like 10 at night and I'm all tired, and I still liked it. It was amazing. And the rhyming... I'm waiting for you to rhyme something with orange. I didn't know half those words existed... Shows how good a poet you are, and how bad a poet i am. Loved it. 5/5 cause its once again perfect