"Honestly, what's your secret
How do you go on everyday
With a smile on your face
How come I can't smile
Why do I always cry"

^ I'd put question marks at the end of the questions. It's not really a big deal, but to me it shows that you have passion and empathy for what has happened and why you are asking those questions.

I can certainly relate to this poem. It's one of the most horrible things ever. You did a great job in expressing it =)

Great poem!
Take Care and God Bless,
Sarah-Joy

This a beautiful break-up poem, I love it. You described perfectly wanting to forget him, and wanting him not to forget you. I really liked it, it's so well written and it kept my attention.

XoXo
Gaby

Loved all the questions!! And I can relate to this poem aswell. Again, You expressed everything so clearly! I enjoyed reading it! Keep it up! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Powerful, well written. i like it a lot. well done. keep writing.