Aite dude, good poem, straight 2 da point. but maybe the way u asked her out waz all wrong. dont tell her wat she wants too hear, tell her how u fell n wat u want her 2 hear.

Talk to her

Lol this isnt a poem but hey,w/e if u want u can use one of my poems(i only giving u permission to one and u cant like claim u made it, thats plaigerism) tell me wich one u want bi commenting on it then ill git bak to u.