Comments : Did you ever?

  • 17 years ago

    by Natalie

    I liked the last stanza alot. But, the second stanza seemed a little rocky with the flow. If you fixed that up a little I think it would be great. Keep it up! 5/5

    `Taleee. xx.

  • 17 years ago

    by Elisa

    This is a really good poem. it shows how most girls feel. asking themsleves if what they do for that special person is really worth it. i loved it