It's not that long and I think it flows fine. It was really hard to read, emotionally, because you knew what was coming. A great poem, and it tells a story. I'm sorry if that really happened to you, and if not then I'm sorry for everyone in teh world that it has happened to. 5/5 dearie.

Ravyn

I'm soo sorry!!! *hugs* It is an awesome poem though!! Keep writing and letting your emotions out!!

I'm so sorry...great poem but very sad...

*hug*...Great Poem

Wow.. I'm really sorry that this has happened to you. I've never understand how someone could do this to someone else. You were very strong in your words with this and really got your point across. And it was very brave of you to speak out, most people don't have the courage and I admire you for that. 5/5**

Some poems are not meant to flow...they work because of the feeling in it...That is what this poem had...Nice job...
Emma 5/5

Wow, this was a great write, but wow. That 2 serier poem, it totally killed this one :P haha jks. This is just as good!