Awww. That was sad.

It was good though. I loved these lines:
"It's what I want and what I need
The urge to die and my urge to bleed"

Awesome job! 5/5

`Taleee. xx.

Ur poem was deep i really liked it, and i can relate...nice job 5/5...u shud check out some of mine...

Amazing poem. i lvoe it.. i can relate to it.. it has great rythm.. flow.. and word choice. its sad tho.. very deep and has alot of emotion put in it... keep writing.. great job...
take care and stay strong
~angie~