Awww..I love this poem its a total romance for me
you did a very good work on it and your use of words was very captivating and wonderful

you have so much talent inside, just try to read poems of others and comment on them, you'll improve your talent and you'll have their comments back and believe moi you'll read some satisfying comments =)

Good luck with the comings
and thanks for your lovely comment I'm so glad someones ready to pray for us, thanks huni XD
Best Of Luck
NemO x0x0x0x

Good rhyming

october