Gr8 poem keep it up 5/5
God bless u

Wow that is really good i like it alot
keep it up
: )

Another wonderful poem. I love the meaning behind it too. God bless you and your family. Keep up the good work.

This poem is so good... im so impressed! high five :} pm me sometime mk? keep it upp

Interesting poem. Loads of tiny errors, but I won't list them all. Just make sure you use apostrophes!!! lol The story was somewhat cryptic, which made this an interesting piece of work. Keep writing, well done.

Very awesome lol keep up zee awesomeness
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Kianna

Nice write, write more