I really liked this poem! one that people can relate to one day in there life..theres always the time we want to leave our home town and just start all over...liked the style of this poem, pretty different! Well done!
-Krissey

This one is also good I think that you need to work on the spelling....It really throw ppl off with the spelling be so off.

I thought this was pretty good i know what you mean

Hey i really liked your poem. alot of ppl can relate to it.
dee