This was beautifully written it is soo pretty... and has so much meaning... i have had that happen to me... it sucks b/c u feel so much for them.. i hope you guys can work through it... good luck.... and keep writing

Lol i like this poem...it reminds me of how i used to be lol or how it couldve been for me now...but no i dont have a myspace lol i have a xanga...www.xanga.com/codysmaster

Thats it if you have one...umm yea my summer...its actually really boring right now and rachel is about to go away for a week...again... yaaaay(sarcasm) lol

I hope your summer is really good!!!

btw 5/5

Oh and i i want to send a poem to you that i cant put on here...its really long but tell me what you think of it...like...its reaally long tho lol

Yea...ummm i dont think i want to do that though!!!! i could just make a website and put it on there real quick lol yea i might do that...k but yea i just dont want this girl to see it...that could be bad lol

Lol this is my site....

www.freewebs.com/grrtolife

so go there and go to ummm The Story Of a Heartless Boy

Lol thanx! Yea...lol its emo but i like it lol your poems are still way better than mine tho!

I loved how you made an acrostic message in this piece. It was so gorgeous that I can't even stop rereading it. =) The message behind was, yet again, very bittersweet. Keep them coming! I hope you all the best and take care.