Wow i really like it also ty fer the comment

Woah. this was really gr8! i loved how everyline had a descriptive word that really kept u in the poem! gr8 work n thnx for the r/c! 5/5

Love it beth...
Riana xox

Hey gorgeous..
i love it..
love you. xox
Helena

Really beautiful........keep on writing great poems!

I kno exactly how you feel too...
hang in there.

~Tori