Lol sry I no its a dark poem but der is a dark humour 2 it all, and I did find da water my flowers bit funny- i think its the realism, lol. but NEway, I really rweally lyk dis 1, its different from da ova stuff you've written recently.The sarcastic undertone is so you so I think dats y I like it so much cos its a very you poem. The flow was perfect as well and I think it fits the poem perfectly, showing the contrast between the evnts and the inner thoughts and feelings. NEway I wuld witre more but afta my day Im kinda braindead- sorry.
Love you,
Beth xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx

I agree.
The sarcasm you used was so affective.
but i disagree that im better then you.
because i believe there is no better nor worse. but varied thoughts put together differently. and some people prefer this and some people prefer that.
so that shall stop the arguement right there.
With adoration
~Emma

Whew this sure is a strong piece!