Hey honey, i just thought i would read a few of your poems since you had a look at one of mine.
Even though i don't believe there is a god, i still agree with every point you made in this poem. People abuse the world and don't see the beauty and a majority don't appreciate what we have been given. The world would be a much better place if people would only notice and care. You wrote a truthful and realistic poem, well done!
Ginnie x

It may not be your best piece as you said, but i sure liked it.
The repetition really got the point across about whats happening in this world
I really liked this one
5/5 as always
*Gem*

Excellent poem , well written ,great choice of words and flowed good, you have done a remarkable job expressing your thoughts and feelings on this matter , and I agree with you , people need to stop and think about the life they live and try to get along with each other , to much hate and death in this world and not enough love m great job sweetie, kepp it up , your friend Tracy d 5/5